Review Detail of Demons_and_I in Dreams of Cultivated Wisdom

This is a good one. The writing quality is good, and there are only a little grammatical errors. The story concept is very unique, very innovative. My only issue with this is that the story seems extremely slow paced. There is not a lot of excitement in these initial chapters. There is also a lot of detail without action to even it out. If you can resolve this, the this book would be fire. I'm excited to see what you can do with this book....