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Saad_Ur_Rahman
Saad_Ur_RahmanLv41yr
2023-09-10 04:26

i dont usually do reviews but this is good , doesn't have that bad Chinese patronism the Grammer mistakes are few . but most of all it is genuinely funny , all the characters are alive , they have a personality , this is definitely worth reading , and at chapter 500 it hasn't gone towards cultivation , it's sticking to it's starting theme , it has a story , an idea and not just cliches piled on top of one another

Apocalypse: System of lotteries

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3.9
528 Chs

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Tiaxotrax
TiaxotraxLv14

WARNING do not drink beverages while reading. May result in either accidental inhalation or explosive exhalation, possibly both. The comedy tag is deffinately the best choice for this book. At least once a chapter I either giggle smirk or completely guffaw. The story is good the system is okay the world is growing. The comedy is what lifts this more than anything and that is okay. I’m loving the comedy.

1yr

Captain_Spoiler
Captain_SpoilerLv13

Honest reviews are here.. So basically, the novel title "Apocalypse: System of Lotteries" is barely related to this novel plot line.. Read the first chapter, and you would see "travel frog system" and not as novel titles "lottery system." It is confusing at first, so I continue to read in case MC gets a bugged system or something later, but it is not.. It will be forever "travel frog system," and this novel is about MC controlling his pet frogs through the system in the apocalypse world full of zombies.. This novel prioritise comedy.. If you are looking for adventure, fantasy, fighting zombie, or cheating system abilities, this novel will only disappoint you..

1yr
See_you_in_heaven
See_you_in_heavenLv3

Grammar and word choice is meh, much room for improvement. There are also some redundant words here and there. Not many descriptive words, some even repeat often. Other than that, it's pretty interesting.

1yr
Mark_Mads
Mark_MadsLv1

An interesting novel with good potential. I wish the author does not give up the novel!

1yr
BL00DY
BL00DYLv4

Why do I feel that it's written in some different language and then translated to English? Practically everything which was named in the previous chapters got called in next one's differently than before, even stats in status...

1yr
ForLone
ForLoneLv5

If only the grammar were fixed re edit it please

1yr
stonejaws
stonejawsLv14

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Mystery_Slow
Mystery_SlowLv2

what happend to superhunt why did you delete it?

10mth
Kaniu
KaniuLv1

and here you can advertise your novel, please tell me yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

1yr
Cute_Melon
Cute_MelonLv13

Can someone please tell me why the title says System Lotteries when it is a Frog system???

1yr
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