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UdayKumarUking
UdayKumarUkingLv41yr
2023-12-25 18:41

At first it started hood, later on it took me 250 chapters to get irritated , MC is dumb, he is repeating the same mistakes. I liked the concept but the author isntable to create a good system interms of technology power structure or mage.

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BookWorms007
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I liked the novel initially. But as chapters went by, frustration began to build up. MC is far too weak. His harem members have no choice but to sacrifice for the MC. ( SPOILER - one member goes into a coma, another one gets kidnapped, another one has no choice but to follow royal decrees......). The entire novel revolves around his heroines suffering from various atrocities. Yet, the MC is not cruel enough. He still follows the conventions and values of EARTH. He keeps forgiving enemies who later comes to bite him in the back. And it took 350 chapters for the MC to realise that he should be powerful if he need to protect.his loved ones in this power hungry world. Sometimes I wonder if the MC was as naive as an infant in his previous life. Apparently, he keeps saying that he should get more powerful but he does very little to actually get powerful. Also the power system in this novel is weird. We don't have a standard criteria to measure the power levels of the MC. We don't know how strong the enemies are or what is the supposedly highest level a person can reach. The system is useless in this regard as well. Also, most of the chapters are filled with info dumps . I skipped through a lot of chapters due to this. It also becomes weird when author tries to introduce future technologies into such a magic driven mediaeval world. The fine line between technology and magic becomes blurred. Such technologies should only be used as accessories / suppliments to magic system. But author tries to give more importance to technology Eventually even forgetting about magic in the process. What a mess. It is kinda sad considering the fact that writing quality is excellent without grammatical errors.

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