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Item: Reincarnated in my own Douluo Dalu Fanfiction?!
Rating: 5

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Akkuzz_69Author11mthAkkuzz_69

Yeah. I am reviewing it again because it reached 130+ chapters. Honestly, I never thought I would reach this far. Anyway... The starting chapters like 20 to 30 chapters, are mostly rushed and written without a solid plan in my mind. Just for wish fulfillment. As I was translating another fanfic at the same time I can't really concentrate on the beginning chapters. So I stopped translating that and concentrated on this fanfic. There may be some grammatical and spelling mistakes in the starting chapters, but I improved myself and I think those are reduced in the latest chapters. And it's an Anti-TangSan novel. Give it a try... If you have any questions ask here, I will reply...

Reincarnated in my own Douluo Dalu Fanfiction?!

Akkuzz_69

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Replies15

jojoluLv13jojolu

its good i love tang san/yu shitgong bashing novel XD

5mth

Nothingness_Lv3Nothingness_

travelling another world ?

11mth

Akkuzz_69AuthorAkkuzz_69

I am not so clear on that part bro...I will do that if I really had time in the future...

Nothingness_:travelling another world ?

11mth

Abashelkoolhem_399Lv14Abashelkoolhem_399

Did you at least rewritten some of them? or even editted?

11mth

Akkuzz_69AuthorAkkuzz_69

No bro...

Abashelkoolhem_399:Did you at least rewritten some of them? or even editted?

11mth

Vince_GregorieLv4Vince_Gregorie

This is your own fan fiction right?

Akkuzz_69:No bro...
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11mth

Akkuzz_69AuthorAkkuzz_69

yeah ofc

Vince_Gregorie:This is your own fan fiction right?

11mth

Vince_GregorieLv4Vince_Gregorie

Akkuzz_69:yeah ofc

11mth

Avi_RohillaLv4Avi_Rohilla

good going

10mth

Avi_RohillaLv4Avi_Rohilla

try to clear out future thoughts so that you won't end up stuck on a part. Try to at least give an outline as to what the future holds for mc. It will help progress the story and also become a compass for the way forward. Anyway the fic is good so far

10mth

Avi_RohillaLv4Avi_Rohilla

and i am talking about the immediate future, not the divine dragon and further future. Just what are his plans for the next 50 chapters or so.

10mth

Akkuzz_69AuthorAkkuzz_69

Wel...Ruining Mc and some of his allies' life...there are still some girls to get...drak spirit masters...something like that

Avi_Rohilla:and i am talking about the immediate future, not the divine dragon and further future. Just what are his plans for the next 50 chapters or so.

10mth

Avi_RohillaLv4Avi_Rohilla

mc in your comment mean tang san right?

10mth

Akkuzz_69AuthorAkkuzz_69

yahh

Avi_Rohilla:mc in your comment mean tang san right?

10mth

Aliyan_Bhatti_6672Lv1Aliyan_Bhatti_6672

Best novel but add some yuri or Threesome or Fivesome

6mth

TranslatorBoyyLv1TranslatorBoyy

Don't listen to him writer, Yuri is a disgusting thing, threesomes are fine but not Yuri 🤢

Aliyan_Bhatti_6672:Best novel but add some yuri or Threesome or Fivesome

6mth