Thanks for your review.

Any paring?

The reason I pinned this review is that it got the most likes and most people had the same opinion. I’ve said this many times, but let me repeat it, I’m writing the novel in my native language and then translating it. I’m new at this and I’m learning how to do it by doing it. I have a lot of mistakes and I continue to make mistakes. I correct them as I notice them or as readers point them out, and I thank everyone who helps me with this. The first parts of the story are really badly written, but I don’t think my story is bad. I don’t think the powers the character gets are ridiculous. The character uses the much-mentioned oaths three times for occlumency, for the house-elf, and to increase the harmony between him and his wand. These oaths are a mixture of the unbreakable oaths in Harry Potter and the nen oaths in HxH. Now you may think that this is ridiculous, and I respect that. But I think the combination of nen oaths and magic oaths is a real possibility. My biggest mistake may be not explaining how these two types of oaths work. Harry Potter’s unbreakable oaths are that the oath cannot be reversed, and the oath is magically binding. If you break it, you die. The nen oaths in HxH are used to increase the power of your nen by placing a limit on the use of Nen. If broken, there are severe consequences and it can lead to death. ‘Being a product of the mind, Nen responds to the goals, strengths, and desires of individual users.’ This is the section I took from HxH’s wiki. I think everyone can see the similarity between magic and nen. As a result, I thought I’d make a mix of these oaths and use them. The character gains certain powers by virtue of the limits imposed by the oath, e.g.: Occlumency, his shields become impenetrable, his bond with the house-elf is strengthened, so the house-elf becomes smarter and stronger, his harmony with his staff increases and his spells with the staff become easier and stronger. It doesn’t seem absurd to me, but I understand and respect if you disagree. I don’t question the comments made on the character’s behaviour, even if I find it absurd. We have all read many novels of a similar genre. Many novel characters are like terminator and similar types. I try to make my story realistic and imagine my character as a person with deep flaws and problems in his past life. After the character transmigrates, his reality changes completely. Although I could not explain these parts much at the beginning, I touched on them in the following chapters. With the distortion of his perception of reality and the flaws in his past life, he behaves stupidly. The character makes plans that make sense according to his own ideas and experiences the consequences of these plans. You need to read up to 25 chapters to see these results. Now I know it’s hard to do that much reading for a bad novel, and I don’t say this as an excuse. My novel has a lot of grammatical errors and bad spelling, but it gets less than it progresses. I could have given these answers to this review, but I chose not to because I know that there are many novels that are much better than mine. I really don’t think my novel is enough to waste people’s time, but I’m trying to learn as much as I can. I thank everyone who has supported me. If you look at the comments on the novel, I have answered most of them and thanked them all. I never expected to get so much feedback when I started writing the novel, and again, thank you to everyone who showed interest.

The answer was too long :)

You must have scared the poor dude lol... He just asked for pairings/love interests and got a multi-para explanation of everything else....

Dude, it’s embarrassing... I’m thinking of Hikari as a partner, but I’m taking a break for now. I don’t know what will happen when I come back.