Review Detail of Arima544 in classroom of the elite (oc) fanfiction

Quite the decent fanfic, not many FL cote fanfics so it makes for killing some time. Grammar is good by standards of this app, story has its own sense of direction and development. Updating stability is what it is. The biggest and perhaps only issues that occur are with the mc. You gotta remember author-san, when writing a ‘smart’ character you need to focus on showing rather then telling. In my opinion, the mc is praised a bit too much and it’s almost like she’s aware of it, because throughout the fic her attitude is in general like ‘life is easy and I’m running circles around everyone without even trying’. I’m not saying the make her a female kiyotaka who’s reserved about her abilities, just tone it down a bit and you’ll have a interesting mc instead of a Mary Sue.