Review Detail of UndeadAfterParty in Devil Slave (Satan system)
Review detail
It’s a good read for 300 chapters but it feels bland, he never has any time to take a step back and improve himself or his abilities. He is constantly in conflict, he gets attacked and thrown into the next major engagement the night after he escapes the big villain in the beginning. And he always feels just weak enough not to be able to do anything to what’s chasing him but strong enough to fight the big bad guy sends after him. He’s and interesting character(kinda) different, but he switches back-and-forth on his moral compass quite a bit. one minute talking about an inacting judgment on evil people and the next he will blow up a child infront of it’s mother. And he doesn’t really make connections with characters because they unfortunately all die shortly after meeting him. And the chapters are quite short and surprisingly repetitive at times because it has some pretty bad pacing(5-6 chapters to beat 1 person)
Devil Slave (Satan system)
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Are his morals changing over time or is he going to use the “it’s for the greater good” excuse Every now and then. This is just constructive criticism btw so no offense I’m just curious? Because the scene where the kid dies while they are escaping really raises some questions
Dere_Isaac:Well, I wanted to make him as human as possible. and while that is true, power indeed changes people as well as knowledge. his core principle to avenge lucifer did not change, but his view on existence as a whole changes expecially due to his experiences just like you and i
his feelings evolve... drastically, and at a time, one might think he loves people but then again, actions can be very mistaken for intent. There are also times when greater supernatural beings try to bend his will, so it's a lot. but I hope you enjoy it.
UndeadAfterParty:Are his morals changing over time or is he going to use the “it’s for the greater good” excuse Every now and then. This is just constructive criticism btw so no offense I’m just curious? Because the scene where the kid dies while they are escaping really raises some questions