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BigBoiHulk
BigBoiHulkLv31yr
2023-11-12 19:28

The premise is good and it does aren’t bay the author hasa good plan on how the story should go. But the writing style is so frustrating with so many errors that it is hard to keep reading

Devil Slave (Satan system)

Dere_Isaac
4.5
1336 Chs

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Dere_Isaac
Dere_IsaacAuthor

oh lord. please tell me the chapters. i am a person and make mistakes...ill correct them

1yr
atchop_25
atchop_25Lv14

Agree. Too many errors like misspells, there/they, grammar, sudden names (i.e. Chiron, Leonard) that come out of nowhere, and punctuations. Mentioning each of the chapters is too much work. If you don’t have an editor then Use GRAMMARLY, it has a free version.

1yr
Dere_Isaac
Dere_IsaacAuthor

okay...thanks. i think it's my fault. I make mistakes and use names from my other books sometimes. I'll correct it. I'll go back to the first chapters

1yr
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Dere_Isaac
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I had always wondered what it would be like if a murderer or a bad guy was reincarnated and not a shut in otaku. After all, they are both good and bad Gods or in this case, Devil...😈

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dreamy_charcoal
dreamy_charcoalLv3

this is one of the best novel it has amazing plot and has such a vast power system mc is villain with some wierd code of conducts it's awesome everything is exciting idk why this thing isn't on trending also why just 1M it deserves far more than that

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ArkonKnight
ArkonKnightLv3

It’s definitely a good novel I love the way it starts off, it reminds me of your other book in my bloody hit novel all in all great book love the mc and I have nothing but gratitude for you writing this.

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Kiralik
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RasenganMaster
RasenganMasterLv12

This novel is amazing!!! ..... ........... .................... ............................ .......................................... ....................................................

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Zurbluris
ZurblurisLv14

Nice to see another author from Nigeria 😎

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JanDarkv1
JanDarkv1Lv3

I have read up to chapter 560 and I can say the following:1) Don't start if you don't like blood and gore.2) The author works really hard to write the book, have you ever seen a writer studying biology for scenes of blood and gore?3) The character is intelligent and capable, just a bit stupid in discovering the system's capabilities.4) The only thing missing is little or no side character descriptions.Note: Sometimes we forget what the characters look like, so sometimes they could be reminded in the form of little reminders or a special section explaining character appearances could be published.5) In short, it is a book that has been given a good effort, you will not regret reading it.

1yr
Queenie_0599
Queenie_0599Lv3

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Kobeni_GOD
Kobeni_GODLv10

*Story Potential 7.8/10 *Power system potential 8.1/10 *Potential mc 7/10 *Mc Madness 6.7/10 =Personal preference= *(I have read up to chapter 42 and the mc seems to want to help humanity in a twisted way but it is still helping, "potential for possible poison evil antihero savior of humanity indirectly") *Currently he is like a worshiper of Lucifer, he idolizes him and wants to fulfill his mandate, I don't like that but it's passable, what I absolutely dislike is the ideology of the mc, and wanting to save humanity, the author really likes the theme of the demonic and madness but indifference and transcendence are also attractive traits for the mc, I recommend reading "The Path of Omniscience"

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