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BigBoiHulkLv31yr
2023-11-12 11:28

The premise is good and it does aren’t bay the author hasa good plan on how the story should go. But the writing style is so frustrating with so many errors that it is hard to keep reading

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Dere_IsaacAuthor

oh lord. please tell me the chapters. i am a person and make mistakes...ill correct them

atchop_25Lv14

Agree. Too many errors like misspells, there/they, grammar, sudden names (i.e. Chiron, Leonard) that come out of nowhere, and punctuations. Mentioning each of the chapters is too much work. If you don’t have an editor then Use GRAMMARLY, it has a free version.

Dere_IsaacAuthor

okay...thanks. i think it's my fault. I make mistakes and use names from my other books sometimes. I'll correct it. I'll go back to the first chapters

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