It's literally the first thing I'm writing, I'm a little unsure how the story will progress, but I'll do my best![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Bruh let me just put it in a way you'll understand..... if you haven't read this then you don't enjoy life. One of the BEST nove on this app. 1) no Bullsh#t like weak to strong mc 2) not a beta 3) not a pervert whose goal is to capture women like Pokemon 4) well developed plot to the point HE SHOULD BE WORKING ON COMICS!!! 5) a PERFECT story for those who don't like op mc form the start-- Though I seriously still don't understand why people don't like a op mc-- but regardless a PERFECT reason why he can't so readily destroy the universe ### I won't spoil the reason but I SWEAR TO GOD it is perfection#####

dreadful wrighting, grammer, and everything inbetween. intresting premise, but its painfull to read.

The novel deserves nothing absolutely nothing I would give it a 1 star but some of the writing was good but I don’t understand is the MC Tomas or Charles? Also is MC a Female or male also this novel is a Walmart version of the name ju jutsu kaisin

Honestly the concept of the novel is unique and great it my opinion but lacks quality to make it shine. the Grammer is atrocious for the novel making it hard to find much value in the plot and flow when it feels unpolished. The interactions between characters are great but they don't flow well back and forth, this can be attributed with the bad grammar but it feels that at some points in the conversation they stop discussing a certain topic, jump to another one the come back to the original topic. it's hard to notice at times but a second read through and you'll pick up on it. I understand this is the Authors first Novel and they are learning through the development of the novel. I just hope they can come back to the early chapters and edit it as well as not include flags of Brazil or America randomly in the novel.

The story is decent but the writing quality makes it torture to read.

Would have been better to have more world building and character development. There wasn't really much anything from the novel that he got reincarnated on. There will be some "Author Note" here and there in a middle of a chapter trying to explain some things, better if it was integrated in the story rather than posting it.

Wow just wow. its been long since I read anything except fanfics but this is a nice change of pace

i havent read this yet it seem that it has potential but is held back by bad grammar really hope that gets fixed .............................