Review Detail of GeneralDeFartos_L in Why Should I Stop Being a Villain

I read till chapter 308. I gave the story enough chances to improve but I'm done. First is the writing, a lot of redundant information or paragraphs, example: two events with intertwined result happen at the same time and author covers one event first, which is all good, but author after finishing one side, he goes into detail about the other event. This brings me to the second point, too long and too slow, author takes chapters to cover events and repeats things a lot while the progression of the story is atrocious. MC and other characters are all right but they don't feel real, author just keeps repeating "his indifferent red eyes" that it just feels like author wants to force a characteristic to MC even though it's clear that he's indifferent, no need to reiterate a million times. Another point is how childish this story is, and I mean by that is the problems that occur are not thought through properly, it just feels like author got it on the spot and wrote it, which caused loopholes.