Review Detail of aa_aa_8182 in Marvel : SuperMe

so far (up to chapter 8) the story is good enough that i added it in my collection. there are some out of order parts but i like how the writer managed to rap it up in later chapters. the changed pov was out of expectation but appreciated its still raw so author pls work more on realistic parts of the story not every part of it needs to be moral lessons its a personal opinion but i would like to have a slow story line with more characters mixed in have multiple pov's (noy necessary all of it about love and friends) develope your background you have a character that due to his early hard life and depression he might not know about all the history of the world he is in and he also could be under surveillance of shield and later finds about it he doesnt need to go to space like in 20 chapters if you have time and want to develope it more i advise some changes to mcu and more focus on comics and stuff like that he doesnt need to be omnipotent marvel have enough heros to support every crisis but you could just fit him in between develope him more you didnt specifi his exact power level so you could move around it last word you have good penmanship have good imagination (i really like how you made him a gentle person without any cringe there ) i hope to see more of this story p.s. read "worm" if you have time good story can influence your stor in a good way p.s also more of conner's daily life would be appreciated like (i can easily see a 100+ chapter story here worth reading good luck)