Couldn’t make it past chapter two. The grammar is readable but still quite bad and slightly unpleasant. The biggest thing I cannot get past is how stupid the premise of the MC bring a cripple is. Essentially, the ROB decided to cripple him because he somehow thinks making him have a difficult and deprived life will make him use the power for good once he gets it? Like hello? This is so many villains origin story: downtrodden person who is bitter gets power and then lashes out and goes for revenge. Worst of all the MC thanks the being for making him live like a cripple because he thinks he would’ve gone full Chinese style arrogant moron if he was given the powers from the start. Thus, i csnnot stand the MC or the way the author thinks. Lastly, is kryptonian power is drastically nerfed and I find that to be a bit of a bait and switch on the authors part considering the title and cover image. Anyway, maybe the story gets decent further on but I could not get past the above.

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Disappointed With his weakness he should learn to be humble instead he directly goes to Tony to sell something that he shouldn't have. Not only he is in the rader his parents as well Also how much will you try to nerf him His intelligence is so many much that I his idiocy makes it worse

loved it please complete your novel before u decide to leave

This is really good. I Hope you Continue .............. .............................................................................................................................

I loved the story, and how you developed Clark's heart in your character, conveying the hope he gives

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