This contains both v1 and v2 of the story, If you want to read them separately I have made them into seperate novels and may continue to write the novels v2 edition.

/Personal Opinion/ Despite being told not to, I couldn't resist the temptation and ended up reading it. With seven chapters at the time of my review, the beginning held my attention, However, after the fourth chapter, the story had a redo with the remaking of the events from the first three chapters. Personally, I found the initial version to be more compelling and preferred it over the redo. Overall, it's still good, but I believe it could be better.

In my personaal opinion this story start good but become more more bad as it progress

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I pick the first version he should be chaotic neutral it at best to not be used on either side and not also be used to only one side way of handling thing

Me ha empezado a encantar, no suelo leer novelas con pocos capitulos pero esta realmente merece la pena, solo espero que el autor no la abandone y la continue.

This novel concept is great. While the start was addictive an makes you wanna read more it slowly gets worse. I just get more an more disinterested in reading this as I read the next chapter.

The story was fine until the drug cartel arc when u switched pov then u just cept repeating with muscle sore he efored stuff. and I view getting captain America captured by shield as unesisary plot. what was the point of going so dark. I would have just captured black widow and Mc to help gain trust and more before having them escape after a week or 2 at max.

The first web novel you made was better After. that Became a brain dead idiot Knowing well , his armor could easily protect for normal bullets And the other problem.I just don't get when he gained a mandorian armor it makes sense how he knows how to fight cause he literally gained a body of mandorian?