Review Detail of Lol1san in Fantasy: Force the Arrogant Heroine to Warm the Bed!
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Garbage! Not even worth reading. 'Noah', supposedly ignorant of Chinese culture, migrates as the young master of the Yu clan in the immortal realm. and adapts to the culture extremely well (I don't know about you, but no matter how much I read novels about a culture, if you put me there, it takes me a while to adapt). No, what I want to talk about is the silly traditions of respecting your elders as a villain(!), being a good boy, being grateful for favors... Obviously he has a villain system, an demonic cultivation technique and eyes, but the author intends to make him the kind and loyal son of the family. And I don't know if Mc has a fetish about feeling 'warmth' in his heart, but this novel is more like the story of Noah, a lovable, good-hearted boy who takes a little bit of the blame for the actions of his predecessor/villain and tries to be a good boy. Everything else is similar to its equivalents except for the quality of the writing, nothing different.
Fantasy: Force the Arrogant Heroine to Warm the Bed!
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Mhmm! I understand that point! I'll make some modifications to it tomorrow, most likely I'll prioritize some emotional development in a few chapters. It might be fast development, but I'll try as much as I can. After all, I've already written 40+ drafts, and it'll be hassle to remove those chapters. If you can give some ideas, like making Yu Tian reminisce about the OG Yu Tian's journey or some thing, that'll be great! Thanks for your opinion. Appreciate it! Good Night!
Lol1san:Only with family members I might give it another chance. I just wanted to point out how cliché that is. For Mc, when it came down to it, OG Yu Tian and his relationships were none of his business, but when it came to his family members, he suddenly became absurdly attached and loved towards them. You have already written that he received OG Yu Tian's Memoirs but he did not share a close affection with his mother and parents. So it's clear from a lot of other things you've written that he was not influenced by these memoirs. So why does he keep making a cliché and misunderstanding the love for his so-called beloved (Og Yu Tian's shattered soul) 'sons' so much? It would be fine if he gradually developed respect and love for them, but I think he is being very unlogical. I don't expect him to be callous towards everything just because he has a villain system. The reason I wrote this was because this MC is not different from most of the ones I have read and the topic is similar. I saw what you wrote in the summary, it's your novel, you can write it however you want.
It hurts a little, but I can understand your perspective. However, I had already put a warning in the synopsis as to describe that the villain is not evil because of his cruelty. After all, in the end, he is also a person and has respect for his family members who is supporting him. Anyway, I'll put the warning in the first chapter, as to not make the readers waste time, if its not their cup of tea. P.S.: Villain will be cruel to others, but he won't be a bloodthirsty and ungrateful bast*rd who wouldn't even be grateful to others. Thank you for reading!
Only with family members I might give it another chance. I just wanted to point out how cliché that is. For Mc, when it came down to it, OG Yu Tian and his relationships were none of his business, but when it came to his family members, he suddenly became absurdly attached and loved towards them. You have already written that he received OG Yu Tian's Memoirs but he did not share a close affection with his mother and parents. So it's clear from a lot of other things you've written that he was not influenced by these memoirs. So why does he keep making a cliché and misunderstanding the love for his so-called beloved (Og Yu Tian's shattered soul) 'sons' so much? It would be fine if he gradually developed respect and love for them, but I think he is being very unlogical. I don't expect him to be callous towards everything just because he has a villain system. The reason I wrote this was because this MC is not different from most of the ones I have read and the topic is similar. I saw what you wrote in the summary, it's your novel, you can write it however you want.
Suzerain_sama:It hurts a little, but I can understand your perspective. However, I had already put a warning in the synopsis as to describe that the villain is not evil because of his cruelty. After all, in the end, he is also a person and has respect for his family members who is supporting him. Anyway, I'll put the warning in the first chapter, as to not make the readers waste time, if its not their cup of tea. P.S.: Villain will be cruel to others, but he won't be a bloodthirsty and ungrateful bast*rd who wouldn't even be grateful to others. Thank you for reading!image