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Laziness_IsThe_Key
Laziness_IsThe_KeyLv51yr
2023-05-06 15:57

I don't know what i was expecting but it is nowhere near the level of original. But its still good enough ig. Not my cup of tea nowadays

My vampire system: Abraham(fanfiction)

ShadowGrim
4.8
105 Chs

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ShadowGrim
ShadowGrimAuthor

Thanks for the feedback. Will try to keep improving.

1yr
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ShadowGrim
ShadowGrimAuthor

Author here. Believing in yourself is the first step, thus the 5 stars. I already have all the major plots in my head so I intend to complete the novel. This is my first time writing, there may be some mistakes left. I'm open to any criticism good or bad, so feel free to speak your mind. As for the novel, I have tried my best to search and re-read it so as to be in line with the original novel. I have only read my dragon and my vampire system. So I will try to use both information when writing this novel. Enjoy your read.[img=recommend]

2yr

edu_rodeiro
edu_rodeiroLv15

let's gooooooo through this book we will get to see how the story would play out with an op character, without any nerfs or being always out on the worst end of things I truly wish this is never dropped, and that it can reach far and wide. because as much as I love the original, it always made me sad how Quinn always got the short end of the stick no matter how strong he got, he never truly won anything tbh

2yr
Aayann_
Aayann_Lv14

I like the book you did marvelous work author the book was so well written and the story keeps getting intresting. And Thanks author for your hard work. [img=recommend][img=recommend]

2yr
LazyXalien
LazyXalienLv4

Chapters Chapters Chapters . . . . . . .

2yr
OtakuSad0
OtakuSad0Lv3

I've never actually read my vampire system, but the only thing I can say is that this is a really good work of art. [img=recommend][img=recommend]

2yr
_Harsh_
_Harsh_Lv14

i think it's overall a good fanfiction if you can i would really like if you could try making fanfiction for 'my werewolf system' with mc that have similar personality

2yr
Weakness_Of_Flesh
Weakness_Of_FleshLv4

The story so far is great. (c21) For my stones worth I am enjoying it so far more than the original, so if the quality remains the same going foreward I forsee something truely great developing here.

2yr
Chulian
ChulianLv13

Overall a very nice ff, with reasonable storyline. Pls keep it up!!

2yr
Wolv96
Wolv96Lv14

Reveal spoiler

1yr
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