Review Detail of Dontlookdown in Morin The Magus

I read through the novel (Ch9) and found the idea behind improving/fusing genes to be a great idea. It is a different take on a system than what is common. I also enjoyed the outlook on childhood and the way the author communicated that. Grammarly would increase the writing quality, as there are grammar mistakes present, but I think that problem can be remedied fairly easily. Not to mention that it will naturally improve as the author grows in skill.