Review Detail of FarmerOfBrilliance in In the midst of it

when I read this chapter I felt confused.Don't know if this is a result of me reading fast,my intelligence or you.You are very grammatically correct which is more than i could ever hope for on this site.I dont really get where the plot could go from this chapter.Your pacing is just fine.Didnt feel too slow or too fast. But this is just the first chapter my misgivings can alwasy be concluded by you hopefully you continue to improve on your work and keep on going. Bes of luck to you!