At first chapters, everything is quite bad. But I like to think that is because the author is New. (Artemis is author's friend Who published his story for him.) the story get better as the time goes especially after chapter 30 or so. The only problem is that because the characters were introduced to us in a bad way, we cant seem to really 'connect' with the characters if you know what I mean. And all the New added characters doesnt helps the situation either. I know how it feels. For New authors, its like devil whisper ing in your ear. Its your story, where you can literally create universes and add anything you like. But that is a huge mistake because of all the background stuff you gotta do. As a person Who read the entire first arc, I can say that in the recent chapters, everything is quite good quality. But as I Said with my rating in the end of the arc, it currently lacks the push to make the readers go further and read more and wonder what is going to happen in the next chapter. If you can handle some low iq and overly emotional moments in the first chapters, this is not so bad fic. So I suggest for People Who can push through Hardships to read it. I can finish a 150 chapter story in 2 days without breaking a sweat but this took me weeks. Finally done my part. o7

There is a special category for fanfic but yeah. You can put it here too but there might be some people who can't see it.

I've already read the Wattad version and let me tell you. At the future events of the story is absolute amazing. At first, the beginning looks a bit boring and you first thought it might be the MC do some hunting SCPs, but no, later there will be a real plot happening. SCP and JoJo isnt the only two series doing crossovers, in the future (Spoiler Alert) there will be also Cyberpunk, Doom, Wolfenstein, TF2, and many others that I've lost count.

good job author i love it btw you fic is pretty goood

I love the story, I have watch all the chapters in the Wattpad and its great, the fights, the character development, and the massive crossovers are so good that it got me hyped. But there is many reviews that complain mostly about the MCs stupidty, especially complaining that the SCP Foundation werent that friendly. Did you guys even watch Tales of the SCP Foundation in YouTube? Of course the SCP Foundation arent that friendly, but those friendly characters of that youtube series are friendly, well, except for Buck but she will have character development in this fanfic. Also, I have read all the chapters of the Wattpad version and its not true that the MC will remain the same with personality similar to deku, no, he gets character development later, not only because of the SCP Universe bombarding him with more problems and traumas, but facing many challenges besides the SCPs and enemies, and you will know he will turn into a person you were looking for, not too edgy but edgy with... VENGEANCE, but he still has his sweet side. Its kinda similar from Jaune in RWBY Volume 1 to Jaune in RWBY Volume 9. And to be honest, those two has very similar traits to each other.

Writing Quality - The early events of the story is poor, but the writing quality gets improved as time passes, I have reach Arc 2 and the writing has now become more improve than ever | Story Development - Not only the story got improve to a great plot, the MC has improve greater from a manchild to a literal man, although he gets harsh situations that worsen his mental health, he has good writing if you ignore the early chapters. | Character design - Being a fanfiction, we all know they're from different franchises and we can search it up to see it. | Update Stability - Its more like 3-5 days a week, its pretty good | World Background - The World background is the most interesting part, the scp isn't the only thing we've seen as there are more things and more lore than we never expect. Spoiler alert, multiple franchises and other fictional films and games were also in the fanfiction.

I have now read over Chapter 180, and gonna tell you that this is one of the best fanfiction stories I've seen this year, in the beginning chapters, I thought the story is trash due to the MC being stupid and immature, and I wondered how in God's name these countless brain cell burning verses all fit together in one fanfiction(Yes, SCP and JoJo aren't the only ones as there are more franchises being crossover in this story), but I'll tell you one thing you nailed it, 10/10! The MC seem have a bad start of course, im starting to like him in the late chapters and the writing quality gotten so much better.I hope you continue writing this story until it ends, because it would be a waste such a one big pile of 💩 but in a shape of a beautiful sculpture which reminds me of the scene from the movie the Iron Giant

The story is great. I like the plot and everything. Keep up the good work

Genuinely one of the most interesting stories ive read in a while, and while the MC has a terrible start at the beginning, his character growth got better even the writing quality went to 8/10. Really cool concept of a crossover story