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Thiago_guedes
Thiago_guedesLv111yr
2022-12-24 23:23

just more rubbish.... this here is total wish fulfillment, the author is pretty excited about it..................... Haaaaaaaaaaa thash haaaaaaaaaaaa

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KyoXIzu
KyoXIzuLv4

Isn’t the basis of most fanfic “wish fulfi llment”

Yunick
YunickLv5

Yes but there are different levels of it, sometimes is just too much. If you have great writing skills and make the story interesting this problem may be overcomed a little but this is not the case.

KyoXIzu:Isn’t the basis of most fanfic “wish fulfi llment”
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Nicolas_Bahamondes
Nicolas_BahamondesLv2

It depends on how you carry the story, it can catch you as if you were in that world or it could be as if a strange friend read you his personal diary.

KyoXIzu:Isn’t the basis of most fanfic “wish fulfi llment”
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Reggielacey_223
Reggielacey_223Lv1

Yet here you are

Reggielacey_223
Reggielacey_223Lv1

Don't read it then...oh wait

Yunick:Yes but there are different levels of it, sometimes is just too much. If you have great writing skills and make the story interesting this problem may be overcomed a little but this is not the case.
Reggielacey_223
Reggielacey_223Lv1

Great chapter again. Seriously what about Enid, your u clearly set something up a couple chapters ago, whens her solo chapter with Vlad

Yunick
YunickLv5

i stopped reading it long ago the day i posted my comment at least i don´t give the author a bad review since i hope he keeps writing, yes i don´t like it but i think people can get better if they keep writing, i don´t say it with bad intentionts.

Reggielacey_223:Don't read it then...oh wait
Josh_Tyle122345667
Josh_Tyle122345667Lv1

i will be the judge of that

Yunick:Yes but there are different levels of it, sometimes is just too much. If you have great writing skills and make the story interesting this problem may be overcomed a little but this is not the case.
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