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2023-12-29 05:17

the premise is nice enough, but the story doesn't help, in the first place the thing about most of the side characters acting like npcs was awful. Way too many jumps in story points it feels almost disjointed , plot holes (of course),and a dash of grammar errors(not that i can throw any stones but its an early warning), some phrases take away immersion making characters feel even more robotic

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