Review Detail of Bark_in_the_Dark in Multiversal: The Shop

this really sucks. many pointless time jumps, relationships that come out of nowhere, the mc doing actions without any sense. (apparently out of nowhere the mc has 40% shares in most large companies) but he likes to live like a normal person ... It's in the fucking world of fate, but it's not even explained correctly. The author adding characters and relationships out of thin air. One example is bochi, another D , hoshino Ai... and the list goes on and on. The "system" is a poorly made and planned crap. Seriously if you are going to do something, even plan it well