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PidgeonKing
PidgeonKingLv41yr
2023-02-20 00:00

Not bad at all, not many fanfics let the MC pursue a purely martial path without some cultivation/magic bs just for plot armor or something like that. I like the fact that different martial arts were introduced so it's not a repetitive cycle of 'punch, kick, punch' like most writers present as of today (seriously, you'd be surprised at how many just write stuff along the lines of "X punched Y to the sky, then kicked Y back to the ground" without any details whatsoever.) the fact that the world is more 'balanced' with the 2x increase in difficulty makes for an interesting premise when talking about how will the plot develop, don't need to mention how it'll affect cannon because it still hasn't started so it remains to be seen. overall a good novel, could give a little bit more background to the world outside of martial arts and the tournaments and the characters be developed over time, the writing quality is good and I've seen little to no mistakes in the wording and grammar. thank you for giving us a good novel and hope to see more of it in the near future, keep improving and i wish you the best of luck with it~~

BNHA: Martial Arts God

Damaine_N
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Damaine_N
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Hey! It's me. I'm purely rating this out of my writing quality and what not. My English is not the worst, it's above average I'd say (Even if I usually reuse words). As for the stability of updates, I update 3 times a week constantly, more if there's a holiday or something to commemorate so I hope that counts as 5 stars. And as for story development, I try to emphasize my MC's journey more than the main plot so the plot is going to take a while to reach, but there will be easter eggs on some main characters, so please keep an eye out. Character Design... Hmm... As of chapter 11, I still haven't finalized a design for him. I've already got his personality and abilities down, but design-wise, not yet. I'll keep you guys updated. And world background. I'm keeping some aspects of the world of BNHA the same before the plot, but once we reach it, oh boy it's going to be interesting. Well, that's my review of Chapters 1 to 11. I'll update more on my review the further we go, but for now, I hope this is enough to satisfy incoming viewers/readers that want a pure review. Thanks for reading this, and I hope you have a great day!

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BigPanda69
BigPanda69Lv2

Don't waste your time on this bs fanfic........nothing related to mha at all...no character interaction....fkin disappointing that's all...................

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thesacredmenace
thesacredmenaceLv11

I Have been waiting for a fanfic to have this premise, no BROKEN quirk but straight martial arts like Mori jin(wukong),Bang/Garou from one punch man etc. My only Issue with the original MHA was izuku never trained or tried hard until he got OFA.

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Holy_shiiiiiii
Holy_shiiiiiiiLv4

First of all, as a martial arts focused fix, no overpowered powers and allat. The fighting parts are just straight up pasting skill names (goofy). Partner choice is toga himiko which the MC simps for too much, gives her 1 liter of blood daily. Also, as a 20+ yr old reincarnate he easily gets mad over taunts and cocky opponents like a lil kid. The only interesting thing in this story is the renewal taekwondo but ig the author wasn't able to show how good it is instead of spamming 10 skills like it's an rpg.

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WomboReader
WomboReaderLv5

I don't know anything else but just kept going and get those words up and have a viable ending since we reader's are tired of either dropped FF's or just straight up disappear in the ends of the earth with unfinished FF.

1yr
Uncle_Roger_main
Uncle_Roger_mainLv14

I mean it’s was great up until the author introduced another reincarnated person. Just set the whole thing up for a crash and burn. Mad me put my leg down from chair. Haiyah

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skulputulurubug
skulputulurubugLv14

started out great with martial arts focus, then became cringe when MC decides to be a Vigilante/criminal

1yr
Nicolas_Bahamondes
Nicolas_BahamondesLv2

El titulo esta mal, es una historia de god high school pero mas nerfeada

1yr
Jai_pareek
Jai_pareekLv4

writing quality is excellent. story development with its build up and unexpected new character intro was superb. but main problem being mc when you power up everyone else and your mc is getting beat up even when he was training from the age of 4yrs making it quite meaningless if he is going get beat up when it was a really important( or in Canon). I like the bond he has with his reincarnated friend but this friend is more op and more importantly wins in a fight, so I think he should be the mc, as the main job is being done by him. I don't think mc will be getting stronger soon and since the villains are stronger than him hence reducing mc's role as a support hero.

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Daoist_Hart
Daoist_HartLv4

it's like born on "Shokugeki no Soma" instead became chef but became musician. if mc of this novel came to wuxia or chinmi he's probably average at most.

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