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Sabaroth_zarkiel
Sabaroth_zarkielLv41yr
2023-08-23 05:48

Hello author is this novel dropped you haven't updated in entire month.

Marvel: Horus, God of Evolution

RealDarkSeraph
3.1
22 Chs

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RealDarkSeraph
RealDarkSeraphAuthor

Nopppe just making plans and school has started for me. Just want to get things in a groove but I’ll upload two chaps Sunday.

1yr
Sabaroth_zarkiel
Sabaroth_zarkielLv4

OK I really appreciate your efforts and I am really thankful for the chapters, I hope you keep writing the novel, I really like it and thank you for replying.

RealDarkSeraph:Nopppe just making plans and school has started for me. Just want to get things in a groove but I’ll upload two chaps Sunday.
1yr
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