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OrionPeverell
OrionPeverellLv41yr
2022-12-19 00:18

dont drop it bro i because it entertaining and have a cool concept

Marvel: Horus, God of Evolution

RealDarkSeraph
3.1
22 Chs

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RealDarkSeraph
RealDarkSeraphAuthor

Thank you!! I won’t. I have plans for this book that should be over 300 chaps haha

1yr
OrionPeverell
OrionPeverellLv4

well that's a relief, keep up the good work and be happy

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Phenix_Rox
Phenix_RoxLv14

Divine Emperor of Death Great novel. In start it's like a silly novel because I think its author's first novel. But after 300, story build up well. After 1200+, story will get better, and it led readers to curious about what happen next. Some misunderstanding happens (like you will get wrong ideas for some scenarios) if you read around 300 or little less chapters because you will think it's just an OP or something not right to read because it's silly novel. But just trust and read at least 1500+ chapters and you will find those early worries not necessary and lot of OP(like death note) will come up with lot of restrictions. (Those are figured in novel by MC) Novel gets very interesting and now its lot more with cliffhangers (I'm at 2513). Also, author discount (99%) 3rd tire privileged chapter for just for 90 coins. For unlock 3rd tire 90 coin, each chapter also 1 coin (99% discount) Include 6 chapters for that tire. Also join his discord channel there you can clarify about your doubts about some chapters, if you feel novel will get wrong direction or not right in your sense. because author like to mislead readers (like teasing) and write entirely different stories. Also, author like to hang the reader's lot of cliffhangers. So, if you think it's not right to read story because you think it wrong like something happen, then you can ask it on discord spoiler channel and clarify what will happen next by fellow readers and continue to read.

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The concept is cool but story wise, it's just a botched wishlist that overflows followed by perks used as more wishes, and then more and more greed that pretty much kills all excitement and makes you wonder why he didn't just wish for the three omnis and be done with it. I mean, there's no end to this guy's and and and and and and and and ands in things he gets and wants in addition to getting them handed to him without effort. There's no story to be developed, the characters design is that he has endless nepotism fulfilled by the author that kill possible angles for story development and as a result the writing quality suffers and the world background is meh. It has nice updating stability tough. It also has a wickedly cool display picture and the title to draw in views. It's just the lack of story is pretty much killing this for anyone getting past the endless wishes and perks with the two chapters afterwards.

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Bruh, there are so many grammatical errors, the character dialogue is completely messed up (this can be observed from the start as the mc talked to the god, his supposed "brother"), any self-respecting author would not use profanity's in their story, especially as casually as this author has. The author uses swear words as if they are just random words without meaning (why would a god use profanity, it does not matter if that god is somehow your brother, as one gets older they mature. Obviously this author does not understand that concept). Also not to mention the lack of "common sense", I understand that most readers would not care, but I believe that there should still be some common sense in a fictional story (people do not die from burning, usually, to die from burning you would have to be in an open area and you would have to be burned by really strong flames, or just for an extended period of time. Carbon monoxide poisoning would kill you before a fire can if in an enclosed space, and for many other reasons)

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