Review Detail of JeToNiX in Marvel: The Foundation

Item: Marvel: The Foundation
Rating: 3

Review detail

JeToNiXLv51mthJeToNiX

i dropped this story .reason?, The mc ist the Systems Slave and i actually hate those storys . I still gave this 3 Stars because i did not want to bo Unfair

Marvel: The Foundation

Darkstar_crow

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Darkstar_crowAuthorDarkstar_crow

That’s unfortunate but understandable, no one likes being a slave. Least of all someone like a member of O5 command. I do hope you will give the story another chance in the future, perhaps you will find changes made you might like.

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Axel_GerardLv11Axel_Gerard

Is that the rest of the O5 command will be the originals of the scp or the native marvel like tony stark and maybe the mandarin?

Darkstar_crow:That’s unfortunate but understandable, no one likes being a slave. Least of all someone like a member of O5 command. I do hope you will give the story another chance in the future, perhaps you will find changes made you might like.

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Axel_GerardLv11Axel_Gerard

By chance you didn't forget the Punisher???

Darkstar_crow:That’s unfortunate but understandable, no one likes being a slave. Least of all someone like a member of O5 command. I do hope you will give the story another chance in the future, perhaps you will find changes made you might like.

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saxmepapiLv3saxmepapi

According to a recent chapter, I believe the 05 Command are gonna drop in from the OG SCP universe.

Axel_Gerard:Is that the rest of the O5 command will be the originals of the scp or the native marvel like tony stark and maybe the mandarin?

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Oscar_TamLv3Oscar_Tam

Uhhhh Hi Author i was wondering and very hopeful if you can tell me the MTL name of this novel i really can't wait for more chapters its a very good story kept me most of last night awake

Darkstar_crow:That’s unfortunate but understandable, no one likes being a slave. Least of all someone like a member of O5 command. I do hope you will give the story another chance in the future, perhaps you will find changes made you might like.

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Darkstar_crowAuthorDarkstar_crow

Unfortunately I can’t do that as this story is written by me and therefore no such link exists nor is there any large stockpile of chapters out there safe the few yet to be released on my hard drive.

Oscar_Tam:Uhhhh Hi Author i was wondering and very hopeful if you can tell me the MTL name of this novel i really can't wait for more chapters its a very good story kept me most of last night awake

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Oscar_TamLv3Oscar_Tam

That's unfortunate still great story you're really good don't listen to these guys

Darkstar_crow:Unfortunately I can’t do that as this story is written by me and therefore no such link exists nor is there any large stockpile of chapters out there safe the few yet to be released on my hard drive.

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