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Rubi_Stone
Rubi_StoneLv11yr
2023-05-04 01:07

A cheap story of arrogance. Author has no knowledge in chronology of events, geography of naruto world, story of kisame's life and of course proper logic. And when he started to explain, that kisame got away from pakura via jumping of cliff....that was last straw. 12 year old genin of genius kind don't know wall and water walking, especially kiri ninja and pakura not being able to climb down using wall walking and most of all, sensing a genin that hangs on a tree. And of course such stupid cliche of tree growing from cliff

Kisame

dragonNEET2567
4.2
304 Chs

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jon_T
jon_TLv2

What do you expect from chinese

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dragonNEET2567
dragonNEET2567Author

I am back again with another novel. Like the previous novel, I am translating this one chapter by chapter. So, I don't know what is going to happen. But I hope that this will be an enjoyable journey.

1yr

Jayzeck
JayzeckLv14

This is basically machine translated and slightly edited. even some paragraphs were the same as MTL.

1yr
Agrowingweed101
Agrowingweed101Lv15

thinking that that this fantastic fanfic is pretty dope and y’all should give it a try if you ever watch Naruto. The pace is amazing 🥲 keep up the solid work 🦈🦈

1yr
GENGHIS_KHAN
GENGHIS_KHANLv13

Looks good, pls don’t drop If you ever do romance don’t to it was a girl that has a partner in the original Naruto, it just feels weird.

1yr
Ashir_Ahmad
Ashir_AhmadLv4

it's your typical Chinese novel *male character sneezes in MC presence*MC kills him and his eight generations of ancestors and descendents. female character finds out about MC biggest secrets. MC sees himself in her and let her live after giving her a power up.there are already two love interests by chapter 13 so ........ yeah trash/garbage unless you are into that kinda stuff.

1yr
Tyicius
TyiciusLv14

I'm going to stop at chapter 39. Kisame usual pattern is to find unique items to consume to alter/add abilities. He also has a habit of giving "monster cells," which make the eater obedient and more powerful (for some reason...) Maybe it'll be good later or fall apart. I don't find reading this enjoyable, and for the moment, I have no desire to see what happens next.

1yr
Daoist_Viking
Daoist_VikingLv4

To be honest the MC is an idiot that does tings without thinking. Killing his teammates + 3 of the 7 swordsmen from the start twice and is the only one that comes back alive. No one does anything about it and “thinks he is inesense” Leaves the village for like a month with involving the musikage and comes back like nothings happened. So none of it makes sense for the Naruto world.

10mth
kratex
kratexLv1

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1yr
Guy_Slade
Guy_SladeLv4

This one is a really fun one. The translation is fine, no major issues from what I have read. As far as the story goes, I am really digging it as its from a view point I frankly have not seen before, considering 90% of Naruto FF are carbon clones of another. The panda system is a bit odd, but the author so far has made it work and it is more creative than the usual systems we tend get. As it is at this moment in time (c81), I would say it is worth a read.

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