Review Detail of Riger82_ in Dragon Ball Oneiron
Review detail
Ignore the synopsis. The supposed 'main character' gets mentioned once, then never again until the second arc in chapter 22. The story itself is incredibly goofy. An evil entity that Zeno an the hea angel had trouble with turns over a new leaf all because it waas told Goku's story. The actual setup of the chapters and writing is strange, as well. Odd spacing. Odd positioning. Just odd all together.
Dragon Ball Oneiron
StarscreamSigma
Liked by 2 people
LIKEReplies1
Thank you for the input. For the spacing, I used LibreOffice to write everything first then copy/paste it into Webnovel. I thought the spacing problem was on my side, so I had no one to confirm it. I will fix that in the next entry, but the previous entries will have to wait for the quality upgrade until the story is completed. As for Ark, he had eons in his prison and he was never evil, just a little miffed that he was lumped with the rest of his kind for being a little too serious. Plus, Luminescence is very convincing in a lot of ways, so telling him Goku's Story in a certain way will catch his interest. I hope you can stay and continue reading. Thank you for your time.