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2022-12-23 16:33

What a great novel. In terms of story it's good and simple (not long-winded). In terms of character, I really like it because it's smart and manipulative (maybe?). Want to analyze the situation before act In terms of world development, (I might leave it first because there are still a few chapters to analyze) Maybe that's all from me, because I'm not good at reviewing novels (I'm just reviewing according to my personal opinion so there's no need to complain maybe because it's a misleading review) Thank you from me. Author-san spirit

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DreamingPen
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Thank you for the review! I hope you continue reading my novel and enjoy it more.

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The story follows Julian, a mysterious and devilishly handsome young man, as he ventures into the world of "New Dawn Online," a fully immersive virtual reality MMO game. Equipped with monstrous combat experience, sharp senses, and overwhelming charisma, Julian quickly becomes a powerhouse within the game. One of the things that I really enjoyed about this novel was the unique setting of a virtual reality MMO game. It adds an interesting twist to the traditional fantasy setting and allows for the exploration of interesting concepts such as the immersion of the players in the game and the consequences of their actions in the virtual world. The story also touches on themes of power, survival, and the idea of becoming a "monster" in order to succeed, which adds depth and complexity to the plot. The writing style of the novel is engaging and immersive, and the descriptions of the scenery and events in the story are vivid and descriptive. The character of Julian is also well-developed and multifaceted, and his motivations and actions drive the plot forward. Overall, I highly recommend this novel to anyone who enjoys fantasy stories with immersive settings and complex characters. The story is action-packed and full of excitement, and it will definitely keep readers on the edge of their seats. That being said, there are a few areas where the story could be improved. One suggestion I have is to further develop the world-building of "New Dawn Online." While the descriptions of the game's setting and features are intriguing, there could be more exploration of the rules and mechanics of the game and how it differs from the real world. Additionally, expanding on the backstories and motivations of the other characters in the story, particularly Julian's trusted subordinates, could add more depth and complexity to the plot. Overall, this is a compelling and exciting novel that is sure to satisfy readers looking for a thrilling fantasy adventure. I highly recommend giving it a read, and I look forward to seeing how the story develops in the future.

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