Evaluation as of Ch#15: Average WQ: A couple of unnoticeable gramm errors which author-san is improving on. There's room for improvement when it comes to the structure of the story & portrayal of each schemes & plot. 3/5 SD: With a slow to average pace of development which greatly affects the story/MC progression that resulted in several plot holes. Too long winded. 3/5 CD: MC is a transmigrator but his foreknowledge & adult mentality are severely lacking. His powers are OP (Fire & lightning bending) but was nerfed as per your portrayal which is contradictory. Could've improved upon on MCs portrayal for better plot/MC progression. Lack of utilization when it comes to his previous life experiences & Twilight Verse knowledge he have. 3/5 US: Chapters are short, stability of update isn't up to speed & tons of redundancy. 3/5 WB: Nothing unusual since the story/plot is still in it's early stages. Could've explored more on his powers or earthly knowledge to add details or word count then combine it with the current TwilightVerse. 3/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD
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