First of all, writing quality: little to no grammar or spelling mistakes made it any of the chapters I have read. The chapters are also decent length and standard webnovel length Story development: The story is basically a multiverse traveling story but the main character stays for much sorter than most stories. It is not actually a bad thing because this seems to be the case for the more obscure stories and the author has stated that their are plans for way longer arcs of over a hundred chapters. And talking about obscure stories, the thing I really have liked is how the author has the main character go to more obscure works of fictions instead of more common worlds like naruto or something. Though this could be a little annoying for some because you more than likely will have to do some research to know the plot of the story but personally I'm fine with that. I would also like to see this happen for the longer arcs, it could more popular but ultimately still obscure fiction such as re: zero which is already planned, I don't think I've seen a decent re: zero fanfic like ever. One negative thing I did notice is that although yes arcs are supposed to be short, some just don't really feel finished or give a satisfying ending such as the very first arc. The beginning is explained and it also shows off how well the author is able to do character interactions but then the last part is just the main character explaining how he killed Olivia and her brother and no other actual scenes. I know the author explains why this is but as a reader the abrubtness is a little annoying but overall not a true problem. Character design: The main character of this story is something I actually like. The personality traits of Seth are not the greatest but he is still relatable and doesn't seem childish or stupid. He is likeable and so far is fine and fits great for this fic and the story. No complaints. Updating stability: I randomly found this fiction at like 9 chapters and so I don't really have a good idea on the update schedule but it does seem to be once a week. Which is perfectly fine and honestly reasonable, like idk how some authors be uploading 6 chapters for 23 fanfics 8 days a week, like bro you are just randomly typing on your keyboard at that point. Anyway it's what I would expect from a new fanfic. World background: The world background so far has been fine, nothing spectacular but its been two short 2-3 chapter worlds and not much worlding to background or backgrounding to world. I think the author has done a good job of using the short time each arc has, to show and explain the background needed for the reader to understand that world, which is important because you are less likely than likely to know the world already(probably, idk maybe all these worlds are maybe super common somewhere and I seem uncultured or something). For me the world is perfectly backgrounder. Overall: I give this fanfic a 5/5 because I think it is already really good and has potentially to be even better and the author seems to be able to reach that potential. 👍 Note: I wrote this on mobile and it is too tedious, long, and annoying to check spelling and grammar so don't expect perfect of either from this review. 🤷♂️ Also Seth's first worlds so far:
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