Review Detail of GenericPseudonym in Golden Hearkening

I'm reviewing this book a little early in its development, but i think that i ought to give my thoughts. So far, the writing seems to be very high quality. It seems like the author actually cares about the details and puts enough effort into it to upload it with very few errors. I'd especially like to applaud that it doesn't rely on a system. The plot is intriguing and unique and the character design is superb, but the author does tend to overthink and over engineer things. The magic system is a major example of this. It's complicated and sightly convoluted, but it does seem to make sense if you think about it. The basics of the magic system are solid, but it is pretty complicated. The author tends to release a chapter per day most days, but we'll occasionally go a day without. The world's background hasn't been fully fleshed out yet, so I can't really review that, but I'm looking forward to it :).