Review Detail of Leo_Scheiber_5414 in New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live

Idk why people praise the writing quality, I've read to chapter 80, and while the English is rly clear, the prose of the text is basic and downright annoying. Neither the character meant to be people or the npc characters talk like normal human beings. it's always off, and the arrangement of text is often off-putting and annoying. For example, a character saying "something something that's interesting" followed by as he looked over with intirest and other such things. The system and plot are interesting, as is the world, but the characters are shallow as hell(Mc included). The author writes in a lot of stuff that's stupid just so he can reach a goal or certain scene he has in mind. For example, in the story, Mc learns soul magic, which allows him to enter a kind of soul contract with another being and use some of their strength as well as summon them. However, this magic brings the risk of him losing control if he gets to emotional (shocking Mc losing control cliche, also doesnt this sound like VERY vital information for someone doing soul magic) the stupid part is the fact that both his mentors just don't tell him about this when they have every chance to do so and posses knowledge of this and the fact that he can do soul magic and has a strong soul contracted. They didn't tell Mc because author wanted to write a "Mc almost loses control scene" and THEN have the mentors tell him about the whole important losing control thing after he almost kills himself. Not like they could have (and following common sense) should've told him immediately and started him on mental control training he does after losing control.