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Oh my goodness. I read to chapter 80 and I wanted to drop because of how stupid the MC is. Then I got to chapter 82 and confirmed, the author is literally writing this MC as a naive moron. What kind of MC would accept such a contract then provide something as valuable as what he learned so easily to 5 random strangers he just met. The writing also doesn’t make sense at this part as this technique was supposed to be so dangerous but these randoms learn it within 30 minutes with no issues. I gotta drop this now for sure because reading this makes me want to pull the MC out of the novel and slap him in the head. No disrespect author, but what are you writing man?

New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live

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