The story itself is amazing. From world building all the way to character concepts. The only problem I have is the MC. He acts like a dumb bitch and I swear he’s just retarded. I can’t stand characters like that. He has a big mouth and doesn’t even think things through for a few seconds. It makes me not want to read further because the MC makes me suffer. Author for the love of god just give him a massive pair of balls. I can’t stand a whiny little bitch as an MC
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