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KEARISLv11yr
2023-04-08 18:26

"author", aren't you ashamed to completely copy "G.O.A.T" by Mujunel_the_Mystic? why didn't you distance yourself from the "main" story. I did not like this work while reading Chapter 8, I am far from being as evil as I appear in this review, but what the "author" did is beyond any description of the adequacy of the judgment about CTRL+C CTRL+V. I don't mind the GOAT system, because the main author made a really good and high-quality system structure. I'm giving an average grade because you have some developments, but they are too small compared to what-cannot-be-called. grammar is lame in the way of the whole narrative. I hope the author will correct himself and make a work worthy of being considered "ctrl c ctrl v"

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