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2023-01-17 21:54

Where should I start... First of all, unique concept. The concept this book is following is one I haven't seen before, so kudos for that. Now, unto the criticism.🧐 Grammar is poor. The sentences are very hard to understand, as they aren't written properly. Punctuation is faulty as well. But overall, I'd say this story has promise if editing is done.

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Thanks...I'll have to look upon that and do something...

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Good to hear 😎👍

Ink_Quanta:Thanks...I'll have to look upon that and do something...
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