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Hajiko
HajikoLv141yr
2023-04-01 04:00

first this novel is read like a chinese one which was just thrown into an mtl and done. As for the story it seems ok but nothing new, for updates it is in the normal western standard but slow if it where a chinese writer. As for the reading experience it is horrible, there are some cases where it is using the chinese name of something or someone which confuse readers, also the same is happening with the build up of the sentences, sometime I just don't know what I just read. All together is seems like a chinese translated WN which Title was changed so that one can't find the original source. If I'm wrong with my guess, then the reason is that this novel is to similar to chinese novels which was just thrown into an MTL

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LittleApple
3.2
144 Chs

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Jesse_Delgado
Jesse_DelgadoLv14

Did you write this or is this a mtl just wondering

2yr

Kevelino
KevelinoLv13

Gonna be honest, I only read up to chapter 2 and that was...painful? The chapter title had a spelling mistake. How does your chapter title have grammatical errors. If anyone says it gets better, I'll try to revisit this, but for now imma just dip out while I still have all of my braincells

1yr
Cosmic_darkrai666
Cosmic_darkrai666Lv4

it's painful of read that's all i can say read at your own risk

1yr
TREEHOUSE
TREEHOUSELv13

where credit for original creator Mtl[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

1yr
JNthn
JNthnLv4

please tell the original title TellMeTellMe

1yr
Korner
KornerLv7

Strongest​ confuse poison​ mtl story#Death

1yr
Chronosign
ChronosignLv4

Doesn't even deserve a tenth of the attention it has gotten, the only reason it has is because the are so few decent system/multiverse/shop stories out their and the readers checked it out only to be brought in for a world of disappointment. No background on MC, spelling and grammar are out right terrible (not saying once every few chapters, but quite a few times repeatedly throughout each chapter), the guy beats Mihawk in Chapter 2 and was given Yoru (name of Mihawk's sword) and also to the swords of Gol D Roger and Shanks. When I started reading this, I had a bit of hope that it would be good. But everyone who actually reads the reviews before the actual story, the only thing I have to say to you is "Don't bother, it's not worth your time".

1yr
RS_1
RS_1Lv4

it gives me a good read, got nothing to read at the moment

1yr
LeonardoJrjr
LeonardoJrjrLv1

The only negative aspect its the grammar in itself (and thats me being a non native english speaker) besides that is a very interesting concept that carries very hard (with grammar mistakes i do refer stuff like calling kurenai "hong" or ayame "iris" and those are some lighter examples)

1yr
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