Review Detail of LoneWolfAuthor in GHOST RIDER in Attack on Titan
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GHOST RIDER in Attack on Titan
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Hey bro, I noticed some spacing, punctuation and words are spelled wrong in your synopsis: "A boy died and reincarnated into Aot world.he got few GHOST RIDER powers . so how he will Protect everyone." If I'm not mistaken, a more correct version would be something like: A boy died and reincarnated into Aot world. He has some of GHOST RIDER's powers. So how will he Protect everyone. -Some spaces look out of place, after period the letter must be capitalized and an error regarding Possessive 's. At the end of your synopsis, you also wrote: "Note : Few characters will be alive who should be die and some characters will be dead who should be alive. In this novel we don't have 'All Eren Way'. Expect My Mc i don't own any character and story." Again, if I'm not mistaken, a more correct version would be: Note: Few characters will be alive who should have died and some characters will be dead who should be alive. In this novel we don't have 'All Eren Way'. Except my Mc i don't own any character and story. -One wrong spacing, you also confused "except" with "expect" (last line). I'm not very proficient in English, but I hope this can help you.
4RT1ST:Hey bro, I noticed some spacing, punctuation and words are spelled wrong in your synopsis: "A boy died and reincarnated into Aot world.he got few GHOST RIDER powers . so how he will Protect everyone." If I'm not mistaken, a more correct version would be something like: A boy died and reincarnated into Aot world. He has some of GHOST RIDER's powers. So how will he Protect everyone. -Some spaces look out of place, after period the letter must be capitalized and an error regarding Possessive 's. At the end of your synopsis, you also wrote: "Note : Few characters will be alive who should be die and some characters will be dead who should be alive. In this novel we don't have 'All Eren Way'. Expect My Mc i don't own any character and story." Again, if I'm not mistaken, a more correct version would be: Note: Few characters will be alive who should have died and some characters will be dead who should be alive. In this novel we don't have 'All Eren Way'. Except my Mc i don't own any character and story. -One wrong spacing, you also confused "except" with "expect" (last line). I'm not very proficient in English, but I hope this can help you.
