1 star deserved, the development of the story is very strange, the MC acts like a random NPC with no personality of his own, he is a 30-year-old transmigrator but he acts like a hyperactive teenager without comon sense. The interactions also feel like NPCs, sadly I didn't read anything good in what little I did read

I don't know if I should write that I enjoy the story because of the progression or not but why are you making the MC into a villain like character .... he's attacking everyone it's like the system is sabotaging him

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the main character is stupid, even the player's intelligence doesn't help... the antihero and villain tag should be added here. appeal to the author: if you tried to do this for the story, you failed

Loved the story in the begining but its getting too edgy, MC is turning into the typical chinese “young master” and the grammar is inconsistent. There are so many spelling mistakes that its impossible to read. Even if English is your second language, there are free spell check softwares and you can use Grammarly to help fix your grammar. Hope you improve this Author and edit your earlier chapters.

i simply love this , one of the best ive ever read , so exiting and cool , p'ease dont drop this fanfic

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Didn't like the villainous approach .

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A exemplary story, the author never disappoints. A top tier fanfic; read if you want to be satisfied.