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DarkHelixDragoon24
DarkHelixDragoon24Lv42yr
2022-12-07 19:46

This a very cool idea please keep it up and try to work on your grammar a bit more otherwise this amazing

Spiderman with Ultimate login System

Spider33
3.9
61 Chs

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HappyDragon
HappyDragonLv10

Why do people use the script style to write a NOVEL? I came looking to read a novel not a f**king theater script. I:- This is dumb I:- You can be more creative and this style is trash

2yr

Ayman_Aman_9674
Ayman_Aman_9674Lv4

look the idea is great ☺️👍, but your grammar SUCKS 😅 fix the grammar and then IT will be LEGENDARY.

2yr
Fi3l
Fi3lLv14

Garbage FF and idiot author. The author decided to give Peter a tragic backstory in which everyone close to him betrayed, cheated, or used him. Peter, before going against six villains, asked for help but they all ignored him. What happened afterwards? He died and then the MC takes over the body. You would think that this SI would be smart but that’s not the case at all with this MC. He has already forgiven most of the people that pretty much gave him the middle finger before Peter’s death. Why? Idk, the author is stupid. I can already tell that he’ll eventually end up forgiving everyone while adding every female, including the ones who he had a bad relationship with, to his harem.

2yr
ultimategod
ultimategodLv4

Bro me too as a marvel fan-fic writer I can say that this story is super nice to continue to update it

2yr
TeaTop
TeaTopLv13

I'll keep it simple. Way too much garbage cluttered in there. CIAO........................................................................................

2yr
1nTroll
1nTrollLv3

Absolutely abomination, mtl is more comprehensible than this. At least in mtl they don’t use this script style garbage. First paragraph of chapter one will drain your brain cells. Needs heavy editing. At least read it out loud to yourself or run it through a grammar checker before posting.

2yr
ssdxd
ssdxdLv14

okay so far I'm interested in this story. spiderman was is my favorite marvel hero and I like the amazons that was added in here. Can't wait to see what happens when Peter and Diane go back to civilization it's going to be great. author keep up the great work and please don't drop this please keep it going.

2yr
GluttonousAngel
GluttonousAngelLv14

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Demonwolf07
Demonwolf07Lv4

Author-san,everything is good but If you can then please write the scenes more realistically,everything is "all in or none" . I mean every character is so much 2d and lines cringe. You grammer is good. Thank you for your hardwork.

2yr
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