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2022-12-13 01:34

It's just four chapters into the book now, so I'm going to state what I'm sure of. And that is, the book has a good intro, and the world building for the first four chapters is fine. I'm gonna hold onto this novel and see where we go.

PATHWAY TO HEAVEN

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Thanks for the review. 😊

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