Review Detail of WPOmega in City of Desire

Item: City of Desire
Rating: 4.6

Review detail

WPOmegaLv156mthWPOmega

My biggest three issues in the novel can all be solved with some editing, I mean I swear it was over a hundred chapters before suite was spelled as suite instead of suit. He'd go to his suit, shower and change into his suit, before leaving his suit headed to someone else's suit. Besides editing stuff though, I really like the story and binged all 249 chapters. Also, not what I was expecting when I read the synopsis.

City of Desire

AnWan

Liked it!

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RealBanana19Lv15RealBanana19

Yeah this authors stories premise is good. The only drawback is lack of editor. I followed the other book. He hired an editor for few months but It didn’t workout or something.

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WPOmegaLv15WPOmega

I started the other one, never really got far

RealBanana19:Yeah this authors stories premise is good. The only drawback is lack of editor. I followed the other book. He hired an editor for few months but It didn’t workout or something.

2mth

RealBanana19Lv15RealBanana19

Oh okay. I read around 2300 chapters of that book. How is the sentence framing in this book compared to the other one?

WPOmega:I started the other one, never really got far

2mth