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KaiserLightning
KaiserLightningLv51yr
2023-04-09 01:15

.....feels like Chinese 3rd rate novel.....

Dragonball : Super Raditz

ImagineMaker
4.7
167 Chs

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luckyroo
luckyrooLv4

I also dislike average Chinese ff, do you have some recommendation for DB ff?

7mth
KaiserLightning
KaiserLightningLv5

hmm ITS been a long time since i last read DB FF. so i don't remember. sorry about that. maybe you can find it in mtl

luckyroo:I also dislike average Chinese ff, do you have some recommendation for DB ff?
7mth
KaiserLightning
KaiserLightningLv5

though there's many poison there

luckyroo:I also dislike average Chinese ff, do you have some recommendation for DB ff?
7mth
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ImagineMaker
ImagineMakerAuthor

A long time ago, Bardock had wished upon a dragon, a wish that made sure his children, Raditz and Goku thrive. This wish, sadly was nullified as the brothers fought and ended up perishing together. This book will show what the older brother could have accomplished, if he had survived his fateful bout against his younger sibling.

2yr

Recath
RecathLv4

Very interesting premise grammar is good, If i have one complaint it would be that there isnt more if it yet XD, but for real please keep up the good work this is a really good story in my opinion.

2yr
LaughingArkBuilder
LaughingArkBuilderLv14

Good grammar, a good start, favorable background... What more can a reader ask? [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]

2yr
GAMING_IS_MUST
GAMING_IS_MUSTLv14

was going great until our mc decided to go full on emo edgelord for no reason on Satan, srsly what will that accomplish? why would he even want the champion title? he can get the money himself no?

1yr
Hasan_Shopnil
Hasan_ShopnilLv4

Keep It up...also let mc wish from Shenron to grant him a book through which he can learn all Earth Martial Arts such as parkour,Gymnastics,Yoga,taekwondo,muai thai,karate,judo,aikido,kick boxing,brazilian jiu-jutsu,capoeira,chin na,ba gua,sambo,savate,kung fu,wrestling,krav maga,Fencing,bojutsu,Escrima,Tonfa,Francombat,Hapkido,Hung Gar,Jeet Kune Do,Jujitsu,Kail,Kendo,Kenjutsu,Kenpo,Kyudo,Ninjutsu,Shaolin,Shorin Ryu,Silat,Tai Chi,Varma Ati,Wing Chun,Yawyan etc. weapon mastery (cold and hot),Tech learning,Advanced Haki (Special Internal Destruction and Conqueror's Coating),Rokushiki,Hassoken,Diable Jambe,Chi Manipulation (specially Healing/regenerating Body,Mind,Soul,Nail,Teeth,Limb without leaving a scar),Nen (Without Unique ability like Bungy gum,Electricity of Killua,Magical Vacuum Cleaner etc.So only physical aspect),Breathing Technique (Demon Slayer),Touki,Senjutsu,Yojutsu(DxD),Chakra Control (Only Tanketsu Opening and Water,Tree and Wall Surface Walking),Lightning Cloaking,Eight Gates Opening,Hirekyaku,Hoho,Shunpo,Shunko,Sonido (Bleach),Overclocking,Faster Blood Pumping like Luffy 2nd Gear,Venom Blast/Electricity,Fire Infused Punches and Kicks,Dragon Fist,Healing Technique,Soul Defend,Mind Defend,Ki Absorbtion Prevention but remember he will perform all those techniques with ki so It'll be similar but not completely same like Armament haki won't be black as only with ki coating can you perform Internal destruction,no unique techniques of Nen like Bungy Gum,Vacuum Cleaner but only Physical Enhancement,No chakra cloning but only Tanketsu opening,body strengthening,Eight Gates Opening etc with only Ki,Ki Condensing,Ki Compressing,Ki Ball Rotating Like Rasengan, Ki Techniques (All characters of Dragon Ball,Z,Kai,GT,Super Series,Manga and Even Movies),Magic Techniques (All characters of Dragon Ball Series),Spirit Control Techniques,How to perform All Saiyan Transformations (Oozaru,Ikari,False SSJ,SSJ1,SSJ grade 2 and 3,SSJ2,SSJ3+ All Full Power and Control,Evil Saiyan Transformation,Potential Unleashed,Legendary Super Saiyan (DBS:Broly),SSJ4+limit break,SSJ5,SSJGod,SSJRage,SSGSS Blue+x20 Kaioken,SSGSSRose,SSGSSBlueEvolution,Ultra Instinct sign,Mastered Ultra Instinct,Ultra Ego,Gohan Beast....also please just let him wish for all this techniques in a Book or give him the knowledge of how to perform all this techniques with High IQ,EQ,CQ,Thought Acceleration,Parallel Thinking,Multi Tasking,Ambidextrous,Reacton time and Reflexes (0.05 sec),Super Senses,Damger Sense,Emperor Eye,eidetic memory,Perfect Copy,Mimicry etc....Also please release More Chapters Much faster.

2yr
QTi
QTiLv3

write 3 good i think? Downloading 4 chapters, one per day, very good, the development of the story is not really great, 80 chapters, I did not see anything new, only an additional character doing some things and taking the role of Goku. I was expecting something better, especially the Planet Namek event. I did not feel that it was exciting. You could have made it better. Character design 2 Reason ? Because it is one character, there is really nothing else, and it is somewhat naive. I love evil characters and plots. The background of World 3 is nothing new. There was some explanation, but it still did not leave your own touch, and this is a pity.

1yr
R0B
R0BLv2

The fanfic is not bad, but... It's so stupid. Mc thinks he is a legendary super saying when he can use only ikari mode.... Mc is a hypocrite and he thinks he is better than other saiyans (when they can do the same thing, they just need to try)

1yr
SMomoTempest
SMomoTempestLv14

When I read "Hole in the chest", i thought he has become a Hollow xd

1yr
UNCHAINED_PREDATOR
UNCHAINED_PREDATORLv4

I swear this author only writes masterpieces.

2yr
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