I hope author can speed up the rate at which he updates this novel,I'm willing to contribute one power stone a day as long as the story keeps me interested and I'll let author know when I lose interest,and I hope MC's character is one which is likeable(pls no wanna be hero, who'd willingly sacrifice themselves for someone they just met),well good luck

Good story so far. Not a lot of grammar mistakes or anything. Only downside is that the chapters are a bit short but it works as he updates everyday First I’ve seen a book like this.. I look forward to the future and what type of kids he will have. P/S: I hope you diverge a little and get kids from wives that arent human as thats boring no?

Liking the story so far. It is the first of this genre that I have read that has potential, and for this app, the quality of the book is pretty high. Writing quality: 3* It is easy to understand what the author wants to express, but there are a lot of problems, such as: - A lot of unnecessary capital letters. - Incorrect sentence syntax. - Paragraphs sometimes split in the middle of a sentence. - Missing words (very rare). - Repetitive sentences (which have improved since I pointed it out in one of the chapters). Story Development: 4* It could be better, but there is a clear progression of the story. If the writing improves, I believe this aspect will become much more impactful. Character Design: 4* I don't give it 5* because we still don't have much information about his wives (except Janice) and kids. Since the author has shown intention to give more value to his family, I think this aspect will be addressed in the future. Updating stability: 5* Very good, almost daily. World background: 4* As it is still the beginning of the story, some information is missing, but the author has been introducing it in a way that doesn't feel like an info dump. To improve the story, the author could consider adding an auxiliary chapter with information known to the general population and other important aspects, such as: - World Map: It can even be created on paint, just to help provide a clear view of the world and assist the author in planning the story's progression, such as mountains, rivers, dangerous places, etc. - Strength Tiers - Characters: With the number of children and wives, it will be important to provide: - Name - Age - Relation with MC - Potential in magic and martial arts - Profession - Strength - Techniques they know

me like 👍 go more or else I find you watch out

could you put a synopsis?. it's a good book so far. but a synopsis would draw in more people to read.

i am sorry it did not resonate in be but maybe because, it has only chapter one or i am just tired to understand maybe i can change my rating if there are more chapters to offered.

im willing to give more power stone to this novel as long as there is more chapter i also hope that the mc family can have more lifespan its not good for him to live long while seeing his family die in front of him most of his wife and children dont have his system and talent it won't be good for them to be weak or die before him and thank you for your hard work

very good keep writingregular chaptersthe story is very interesting

A unique nobel, I haven't watch such novel with an interesting concept but the chapters are short i hope u can post it daily[img=update][img=update]