There's no in depth review so I'll try my hand at it. The story is good, the Mc has a system that's not too unique but it does its job. There's no N T R so That's great. The story takes place when the story characters are still kids. There are some parts to the story that I don't necessarily like but I can live with it. There aren't many chapters as of yet so I'd like to see more, Good day and good luck.

It's time to wait for more chapters to pile up to finish them in a few hours shishishi😋😁

Thanks for the meal................................. .........................................................................................

This look like that mtl novel I have once try to read. the mc name was Drake.

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It's pretty okay I enjoy it so far, The only complaint is that they explain their ability sometimes which can get annoying otherwise it is an okay one-piece fanfic.

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work of wish fulfillment. there is no challenge, in chapter 11 the heroes are already at maximum level...................................... ................ ..........