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I read the whole original story without knowing there was a remake and now im here and this one is even better. take my 5 star review and My power stones 😭😭

is this a re make ?

I hope the organisation he makes is more realistic and important this time. like maybe create an omniversal Crime Syndicate and heroes from different worlds (anime, tv, comics) try to fight him and his organisation but get beat up.

I haven't read much of the original(tbh i forgot about it) however i can say that this start is amazing as it is original in its own way just a lucky dude that gains a strong laced with tragedy start like so many DC villains.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Boring. It was fine at first but now all it is is "Look how smart MC is even though it's not that smart everyone around him is just stupid" over and over and over again.

I read the previous version, I don't know if it changes some events but I must say that the author has some mental problems, some things happen especially in the DC universe that are disgusting; It's one thing to be a villainous MC, and another to be a psychopath; I have read novels with villains as protagonists and none have produced so much rejection in me.

Let’s start off with the writing quality, I gave it a 2 because the amount of spelling mistakes and wrong words used each chapter is honestly shocking and really immersion breaking. I count at least like 6 typos or sentences that just don’t sense per chapter so author should really consider getting a editor/proofreader who’s actually good at their job. Author updates frequently and no hiccups here so easy 5 stars. The story development is pretty good and features some pretty basic insight into manipulation with an intelligent MC so I will give them that although there’s quite a bit of plot armour with the MC and no real risk that anything will ever go wrong which is jarring so a 3.5 which I rounded to a 4. 3 on character designs because for some reason every girl is super easily manipulated and just wants to get dicked down by MC which is just unrealistic and one dimensional. MC is pretty good tho as a character but a bit lacking since there’s nothing about his background that could explain his motives or anything about him really. Fanfic so I’m gonna just give world building a 4. Overall a decent story but I dropped it because of the constant fan service jokes and homophobia and disdain to feminists which all just read off as super cringe and childish. Thanks for the story anyway

Who will explain to me what our gg wants?! He doesn't have anyone in Gotham at all. Why did he stay there if they wanted to kill him?! Why does he kill left and right? What does he even want?! That he wants to lie low and for this he kills his best friend who was ready to give his life for him , but then he climbs everywhere himself and I don't understand for what?! In short, I do not like such stories, and she is weak , she will not be able to just take the essence and move into the world of Marvel if he were stronger than Marvel, then he would not need a clone vessel would be enough!