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Review Detail of Romu_san in Returning From The Magic World

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Romu_san
Romu_sanLv211mthRomu_san

Haah! this novel has good story but I don't know how to say this but ,author destroyed his own novel by making it illogical in many ways. first is the days MC took to get a woman who was virgin until her 27. bro she is a prideful business woman not a dumb bimbo. and the way he act to show his manliness is just cringe. the speed at which he condensed his spiritual core of divine level, bro are u serious? and I got it Man, the MC is young but physically, not mentally, so stop making him lustful looser cringe manly boy. haah! he said he is nobel, give me break. Just make the time duration of the things long, damn it. this is a really good story but not putting well the pieces together.

Returning From The Magic World

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Romu_san
Romu_sanLv2Romu_san

and yeah the discussion of students doesn't make sense.