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TwistedTsunami
TwistedTsunamiLv152yr
2023-04-29 07:05

I like the idea of the story. Magic, urban setting, cultivation & romance. The MC is a turn off with his god complex. He looks down on everyone except his aunt. I haven’t gotten too far, but there are hints of possible ‘Bama action with the aunt & cousin, so I’m hesitant to get too far. I like he has his own mercenary team, he’s starting businesses and he has to work to get stronger even though he could be considered OP. I don’t like how he treats Amanda & the girls who like him. She does a lot for him but it’s obvious he has no feelings for her. He just needs to come right out & tell her & her sister that they will only be jump offs for him like he did with the celebrity women. I love romance in novels bc I feel it enhances the story. As of where I am, the romance tag is cap, but hopefully there is character development bc the writer is quite good at giving the reader an immersive experience. In conclusion take away the god complex & Arthur will become likeable. Other than that, I would recommend this novel 👍🏾

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AvidReadrX
AvidReadrXLv15

Thanks for this review, don't have to waste my time reading this novel 👍

Vince_Gregorie
Vince_GregorieLv4

Is the chapter with the celebrities just a one night stand or do they have a relationship afterwards?

TwistedTsunami
TwistedTsunamiLv15

I’ve dropped this, but where I was they were just jump offs

Vince_Gregorie:Is the chapter with the celebrities just a one night stand or do they have a relationship afterwards?
Vince_Gregorie
Vince_GregorieLv4

What do you mean?

TwistedTsunami:I’ve dropped this, but where I was they were just jump offs
TwistedTsunami
TwistedTsunamiLv15

One night stands

Vince_Gregorie:What do you mean?
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Vince_Gregorie
Vince_GregorieLv4

At what chapter were you at?

TwistedTsunami:One night stands
memeclty
memecltyLv12

same lol

TwistedTsunami:I’ve dropped this, but where I was they were just jump offs
BurglarOfTurds
BurglarOfTurdsLv15

this was exactly what I was looking for when I came to the reviews. I'm maybe 50? in, and the way he treats Amanda by ignoring her and seeming to have no emotion is really frustrating

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