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Review Detail of Eight_Lord in The Supreme Dragon King

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Damn, this shit is edgy as hell, the author is so focused on making "Issei" (in name only) look so badass with a sad past, that that's his whole personality, and the best, the author tries to use your past as an excuse. And the characters, ugh, he seriously tries to make people hate or find the other characters annoying (they're understanding if you don't have 14 year old chunni and emo eyes), he tried to make changes to the other characters to suit the story, and nor did he notice how this affects his entire plot. Vali for example, the author tries to keep that personality of a rival who believes in red vs white, when it wouldn't make a shred of sense in this narrative, in this universe of the Author, Vali was welcomed by Sirzechs and Grayfia, two excellent parents, and Gayfia is a mother figure that should fill Vali's mother's absence, they are the total opposite of Azazel when it comes to children, but it doesn't seem to have had the slightest change, it just got worse, only because the author needs to give rivals just for Issei to play for the author say "He's OP, that's cool and it clearly says the character is well written!". Also, looking forward to seeing Issei tell his "my parents are dead, my life is the saddest" story, only for all the ORC and Vali to laugh and say "welcome to the beginning of shit, next step, get spanked when you're only 8 years for nothing, later", seriously, anyone who has read the canon of DxD, knows that any member of the ORC has a childhood story more fucked up than this, it's pathetic for the author to throw their past to the sidelines just to masturbate "Issei". And the narrative and flow of the story is horrible, but what do you expect from a guy who copies the canon of other stories, changes the characters' names, and says "My story!"?

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