webnovel
Kyran_Ambrosius
Kyran_AmbrosiusLv141yr
2023-08-20 19:15

Personaly i hate it. It makes no sense i could barely get to the 6th chapter. as soon as he fought bruce and won, that was it. The sheer imposability of that just turned me off this story so hard i had to comment. There fighting a mental battle, how does a what you've decided to be a special forces soldier even come close to bruce wayne. in either will, skill, or mental capasity he is superhuman. please stop.

Liked by 2 people

LIKE
Replies8
Dark_Asmodeus
Dark_AsmodeusAuthor

I get where you are coming from, I really do. Batman does have a unbreakable, unbelievable level of will power, but I'm not talking about just any special forces soldier, the Mc(Theo) is someone who survived till the end of a nuclear war, if you put all the horrors he would have seen in the battlefield and still had the strength to move forward, you could understand, that his will power and strength could be many times higher than Batman's, the best comparison would be Deathstroke and Batman. they have both different types of tramas and different skill sets but Deathstroke still beats Batman sometimes. Hope you read the story further and give a positive review in the future.

Kyran_Ambrosius
Kyran_AmbrosiusLv14

I just don't Understand how someone who stared down darkseid. Could fight genuine gods loose to someone who doesnt have the supernatural strength of batman. I don't Know how much u know about the dc universe, but unless the mc has the same strength as bruce, i just don't See that happening. Even then batman could fight and realibaly take down entities physically supererior to himself like bane. So mabye i missed a line explaining it.

Dark_Asmodeus:I get where you are coming from, I really do. Batman does have a unbreakable, unbelievable level of will power, but I'm not talking about just any special forces soldier, the Mc(Theo) is someone who survived till the end of a nuclear war, if you put all the horrors he would have seen in the battlefield and still had the strength to move forward, you could understand, that his will power and strength could be many times higher than Batman's, the best comparison would be Deathstroke and Batman. they have both different types of tramas and different skill sets but Deathstroke still beats Batman sometimes. Hope you read the story further and give a positive review in the future.
Kyran_Ambrosius
Kyran_AmbrosiusLv14

Even if he does have insane will, hes still a human from regular earth. Hes not superhuman. Hes just a trained dude. batman could dodge darkseids omega beams. Mabye u don't Understand how crazy a feat that is.

Dark_Asmodeus:I get where you are coming from, I really do. Batman does have a unbreakable, unbelievable level of will power, but I'm not talking about just any special forces soldier, the Mc(Theo) is someone who survived till the end of a nuclear war, if you put all the horrors he would have seen in the battlefield and still had the strength to move forward, you could understand, that his will power and strength could be many times higher than Batman's, the best comparison would be Deathstroke and Batman. they have both different types of tramas and different skill sets but Deathstroke still beats Batman sometimes. Hope you read the story further and give a positive review in the future.
Dark_Asmodeus
Dark_AsmodeusAuthor

I do understand but if you had read year one or Batman: year zero, you would understand that Bruce's advances towards enemies changes and he is not even in he was not even in his full potential because he was still in his training period.

Kyran_Ambrosius:Even if he does have insane will, hes still a human from regular earth. Hes not superhuman. Hes just a trained dude. batman could dodge darkseids omega beams. Mabye u don't Understand how crazy a feat that is.
Marvin_Besey
Marvin_BeseyLv5

You had me at he fought Bruce Wayne and won

Kyran_Ambrosius
Kyran_AmbrosiusLv14

What u want to read the story now?

Marvin_Besey:You had me at he fought Bruce Wayne and won
image
nonauracisme
nonauracismeLv12

why not. sounds interesting to me.

Kyran_Ambrosius:What u want to read the story now?
Kyran_Ambrosius
Kyran_AmbrosiusLv14

Eh your choice.

nonauracisme:why not. sounds interesting to me.
Related Stories

Marvel: Mr. President [COMPLETE]

Hector King, a man in his 50s, no family or friends to speak of, paralysed from the waist down due to a work-related accident. Now he lived alone with his pup Huskey. But one day, he mistakenly summoned Satan. "Ah, it's been a long time since I was summoned. You found my book? Good, what do you want? Riches? Women? Fame? Strength? Or perhaps, your legs? All at the discounted price of your... soul." Satan offered. Hector, however, didn't need any of that. And so, his answer even shocked Satan, making that smug look disappear. "I... I want you to be my friend." And from there, the friendship that would last eternity started, all at the price of Hector's soul. ... Year 2021, As a mortal, Hector died. But Satan decided to do something crazy, "F*CK IT! You're my best friend, I can't let you die. Hector, I am appointing you as Hell's Inquisitor, a position only under me." ... 1935, Earth Hector found himself in his old original physical body again, but he was now taller and buff. "I-I got a new last name? Hmm, it has a nice ring to it." He muttered. He was, from then on, Hector King Washington. "WOOF!" And the good boy Moony was also there, bigger, buffed and more beautiful. [A/N: MC is going to be a sweet badass old man.] _______________________ [TAGS - OLD MAN MC, OP, SLICE OF LIFE, WHOLESOME, ROMANCE, NO HAREM, ALTERNATE HISTORY, KINGDOM BUILDING] ____________________________ I do not own anything except the main character in this fanfiction. ____________________________ For advance chapters- www.patreon.com/misterimmortal Check out my other fics if you like this one by going into my profile. Thank You.

MisterImmortal · Movies
4.7
300 Chs